In the English class last week. Mr. Lin was teaching lesson 30,”We are the world. ”Even though this was a very important lesson, John still fell asleep during the class. What was worst, John’s classmate didn’t wake him up. When John was sleeping, he dreamed a dream that he was an English teacher in 2025. John would be an active teacher and hope every one could pay attention to him and study hard. However, John’s class was so boring that his students fell asleep. He felt angry and disappointed; then he woke the students up.
In reality, Mr. Lin found that John had been sleeping for a long while. After John woke up, his classmates laughed at him. He felt embarrassed and said sorry to Mr. Lin. After that, John vowed that he would never fall asleep during the class and he would try his best to study hard.
You did a great job in editing. There is only a tense mistake in the sentence, “Even though this is a very important lesson, John still fell asleep during the class.”